Thursday, December 1, 2016

Early Memories Comments

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Memory collects from every sense
which Words mould into experience
In the museum of our consciousness.
In the Beginning, was St John correct
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Tom Billsborough
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Annette Aitken 04 December 2016

Wow this one is food for thought Tom...I got drawn right into these words as read along...you have some wounderful expressions in here......very much enjoyed this one.... Annette

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Tom Billsborough 04 December 2016

Hi Annette, I wish my expressions when I do selfies were as good! Daughter thinks I look like Mafia Godfather!

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Susan Williams 01 December 2016

You coin the most explosive and magnificent phrases- - - - - - - - - - - - - - its tsunami of light- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - .Or the insistent Mnemonics Of music and of rhyme. Which resonate through the cortex of our mind Into the deepest caves of Time- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -You rock poetry, Tom, in a cradle of beautiful metaphors and intelligent conversation..

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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 01 December 2016

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Though thought provoking, its very lively. I like the us of the figures of speeches in it too. And indeed, we all do have memories...some very pleasant that we wish those activities never stopped, but some also very disheartening that sometimes when we look back into the past, all we ask is, ' Are we really associated with those?

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Tom Billsborough 01 December 2016

Y.es, memories can be very deceptive. I think we have a great capacity for editing them., especially embarrassing ones!

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Tom Billsborough

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