Early Memories Poem by Tom Billsborough

Early Memories

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Memory collects from every sense
which Words mould into experience
In the museum of our consciousness.
In the Beginning, was St John correct
To choose word as the dominating factor?
Or did the first explosion,
Breech the combustible silence.
Birth's trauma and its tsunami of light.
So making the instigator sight?
And yet we learn that in the womb
The sense of touch comes first,
Followed by the bonding union
Of child and mother.
But do we remember this in retrospect
As the first encounter with our senses?
Or is it a flower's scent
Which still illuminates an early incident
Or the insistent Mnemonics
Of music and of rhyme.
Which resonate through the cortex of our mind
Into the deepest caves of Time.
I have no visual memory before the age of two
The first I can recall was of a bonfire
In a street and sounds of joy and laughter.
I think it was VE day. I could be wrong.
Memory will change the substance
Of each incident or song.
So we come back to words,
We learned by the age of two,
So perhaps St John spoke true
At least as far as memory.

Thursday, December 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: memory
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just a few thoughts. Hopefully some members might like to tackle the subject themselves.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 04 December 2016

Wow this one is food for thought Tom...I got drawn right into these words as read along...you have some wounderful expressions in here......very much enjoyed this one.... Annette

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Tom Billsborough 04 December 2016

Hi Annette, I wish my expressions when I do selfies were as good! Daughter thinks I look like Mafia Godfather!

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Susan Williams 01 December 2016

You coin the most explosive and magnificent phrases- - - - - - - - - - - - - - its tsunami of light- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - .Or the insistent Mnemonics Of music and of rhyme. Which resonate through the cortex of our mind Into the deepest caves of Time- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -You rock poetry, Tom, in a cradle of beautiful metaphors and intelligent conversation..

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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 01 December 2016

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Though thought provoking, its very lively. I like the us of the figures of speeches in it too. And indeed, we all do have memories...some very pleasant that we wish those activities never stopped, but some also very disheartening that sometimes when we look back into the past, all we ask is, ' Are we really associated with those?

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Tom Billsborough 01 December 2016

Y.es, memories can be very deceptive. I think we have a great capacity for editing them., especially embarrassing ones!

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Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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