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Early Morning Treats - Poem by .Pd. is here

Sunrays disquiet your sweet slumber,
As you twist in bed, coiled in bedspread.
Your arms settle on my body
Perhaps, they were searching for me.
Wrinkling your nose, you turn to face me
Our cheeks caress, ever so gently.
Your stubble tickles me ample
As your eyes open with a twinkle.
You say, “Nice sunshine we got there
But it broke my dream - how unfair! ”
I say, “Honey, just lounge between the sheets
Close your eyes and go to sleep.”
You fall asleep and your face reflects peace.
And what do I get in lieu? –

Being able to endlessly gaze at you,
And enjoy my early morning treats!


Comments about Early Morning Treats by .Pd. is here

  • Shane Clawson (12/22/2007 4:02:00 PM)

    P.D., I've been waitin for someone like yourself to write out a fantasy I wish would come true. Thanx for sharing! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2007 6:16:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed this poem. ''Touching'', it brought a smile to my face! ! Thank You! (Report)Reply

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  • Malini Kadir (4/19/2007 4:57:00 AM)

    what a beautiful picture it brings to mind! keep it up! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/16/2007 2:19:00 AM)

    gr8 poem...buddy! ! !

    nice flow n yeah very romantic....luv ur style of writing....keep it up! ! ! !
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  • (4/13/2007 5:38:00 AM)

    whoa...amazing
    fantastic poem preets....really enjoyed the treats...
    keep it up! ! ! .....
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  • (4/11/2007 11:08:00 AM)

    Preets..... This is so very romantic.... your words are so full of power that they build the scene right in front.... This is a different you! Loved the smooth flow of words... absolutely romantic reflections! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/10/2007 11:49:00 PM)

    Aww this is so sweet... I love waking up to moments in love :) (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2007 7:33:00 AM)

    hey preets,
    this is quite different from what u usually write...i mean in terms of diction n style...
    i liked it though...

    love,
    Asma...
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  • (4/4/2007 5:11:00 AM)

    Such a loving piece..... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 10, 2011


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