Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Early Morning Treats

Rating: 5.0
Sunrays disquiet your sweet slumber,
As you twist in bed, coiled in bedspread.
Your arms settle on my body
Perhaps, they were searching for me.
Wrinkling your nose, you turn to face me
Our cheeks caress, ever so gently.
Your stubble tickles me ample
As your eyes open with a twinkle.
You say, “Nice sunshine we got there
But it broke my dream - how unfair! ”
I say, “Honey, just lounge between the sheets
Close your eyes and go to sleep.”
You fall asleep and your face reflects peace.
And what do I get in lieu? –

Being able to endlessly gaze at you,
And enjoy my early morning treats!
.Pd. is here
Shane Clawson 22 December 2007
P.D., I've been waitin for someone like yourself to write out a fantasy I wish would come true. Thanx for sharing!
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Ty Robertson 06 August 2007
I really enjoyed this poem. ''Touching'', it brought a smile to my face! ! Thank You!
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Malini Kadir 19 April 2007
what a beautiful picture it brings to mind! keep it up!
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Bhavin Palan 16 April 2007
gr8 poem...buddy! ! ! nice flow n yeah very romantic....luv ur style of writing....keep it up! ! ! !
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Nikunj Parikh 13 April 2007
whoa...amazing fantastic poem preets....really enjoyed the treats... keep it up! ! ! .....
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Catastrophe King 11 April 2007
Preets..... This is so very romantic.... your words are so full of power that they build the scene right in front.... This is a different you! Loved the smooth flow of words... absolutely romantic reflections!
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Desiree Cadle 10 April 2007
Aww this is so sweet... I love waking up to moments in love :)
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Asma Bahrainwala 07 April 2007
hey preets, this is quite different from what u usually write...i mean in terms of diction n style... i liked it though... love, Asma...
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Patricia Gale 04 April 2007
Such a loving piece.....
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