Earth's Greenery Poem by REETESSH SABRR

Earth's Greenery

Rating: 5.0


Greenery is in roots of earth,
outside there is it's dearth.
Rains have ceased to dry,
summers are just passing by.
All the hell that air surrounds,
clouds the sky by leaps and bounds.
Its a bane if not goin to decrease,
threats to melt, our breaths will freeze.
To see this ideal planet of life,
perishing in this human strife
Of ignoring love & soaring hate,
why not believe its never too late.
To pick a positive shade of tryst,
from the nature's love and mist.
Its a hope to raise the blooms,
All the world in greenish rooms.
That prosper to let possible a birth
Greenery is in root of earth!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 27 August 2008

To see this ideal planet of life, perishing in this human strife Of ignoring love & soaring hate, why not believe its never too late You are absolutely true--why not the world believe its NEVER TOO LATE gud write Reetesh regards anjali

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Jyoti Saxena 26 August 2008

true -greenery is in the root of earth -wonderful thot! indeed we should not luk at the superfluos beaty but the foundations on which it thrives-a very gud attempt. keep it up!

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Sandra Martyres 01 May 2009

A very sensitive poem Reetesh on preserving nature - I agree with Palas, it is never too late to do something positive in this direction 10+ from me

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Aiswarya. T.anish 01 October 2008

WE CAN MAKE THE EARTH BY PLANTING MORE TREES AND REDUCE CUTTING OF TREES. I LIKE THS POEM VERY MUCH

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Richa Dhodi 29 September 2008

Its a nice slab sir.. keep writing..

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David Desantis 26 September 2008

makes me want to go walk through the forest hahah....very nice

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Shruti Modi 04 September 2008

its a superb write.. very well written describing the harm earth is going thru and also asking humankind to get cautious and take care of it... a ten for sure!

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