mohamad tabatabai

Ecstasy - Poem by mohamad tabatabai

I saw a drunken man on the farthest land
Where the taverns of ecstasy come to stand
He bent right and left like untied ship
Whom the jealous sober would come to grip
Were are you from, I ventured ask
No where, he said, with little task
He continued:
Half of mud I am and half of soul
One part so good, one part foul
One part of sea, other of land
One part jewel, one part sand
Befriend me, I said, for so close we are
No difference, he said, close or far
Wanderer I am, have lot to say
Will you listen, don't go away
It's love I seek, have no demand
That's all I want, you understand?

Comments about Ecstasy by mohamad tabatabai

  • Nader Baheri (11/9/2013 2:52:00 AM)

    very beautiful.the meaning u r trying to transfer is so marvelous.the only thing we try to get is love.the its both side is beauty~nb (Report) Reply

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  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (9/6/2013 6:52:00 AM)

    Wow marvelous poem on a paradox, nicely rhymd.
    Pls do coment my latest, a gambling poem.
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  • (8/14/2013 6:57:00 AM)

    One part so good, one part foul
    One part of sea, other of land
    One part jewel, one part sand

    Nice lines!
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  • Unwritten Soul (6/1/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    There are major changes, it has a new form and lovely write for sure_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (5/29/2013 7:12:00 AM)

    Interesting write, you done well here just i was confused when i saw the word asid in your poem, then i knew that it was typo of doing very nice poetry but be careful dont type so fast it will make some typo..keep it up Mohamad_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 15, 2014

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