M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,261 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Ek Aisa Rishta Chahiye - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Palkon ka ankhon se hai jaisa,
Dhadkano ka sanso se hai jaisa
Khusbu ka phoolon se hai jaisa
Bus ek aisa rishta ho tera- mera

Chandni ka chand se
sholon ka aag se
Geeton ka raag se
patangon ka deepak se hai jaisa
Bus ek aisa rishta ho tera - mera

Paani bin machhli jaise hai tadpe
Badal bin bijli jaise na kadke
bin hawa jaise saans nahi
Bus ek aisa rishta ho tera-mera

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Ghazal


Comments about Ek Aisa Rishta Chahiye by M. Asim Nehal

  • Souren Mondal (11/14/2015 12:33:00 AM)


    ”Kavi ka pathak ke saath ho jaisa

    wasia rishta chahiye...”

    Bohut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai apne Asimji.. Padke bara anand aaya.. Isse hum saab ke baat ne ke liya sukhriya.10 :)
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/14/2015 12:12:00 AM)


    Needing such a way of love which should be just like a fragrant flower giving essence. Wonderful poem on love is definitely shared in wise mind....10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2015 11:37:00 PM)


    Nice elaboration of a wonderful relationship. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015



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