Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Ek Band Darwaza - एक बंद दरवाज़ा Comments

Rating: 5.0

Guzarta hoon mai jab bhi, wo darwaza bandh milta hai
Issi umeed mein ki kabhi toh khula milega mai guzarta raha

Mere sabr ko dekha sabne, jo bhi mila raaste mein
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M. Asim Nehal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 October 2016

Asim Nehal ji, you are a sensitive, sensible and a wonderful poet. गुज़रता हूँ मैं जब भी, वो दरवाज़ा बंद मिलता है इसी उम्मीद में की कभी तो खुला मिलेगा मैं गुज़रता रहा! The doors that are closed remain mysterious! But there is always a hope that it will open! ! ! Excellent poem in Hindi. I loved the poem. :) 10+++

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2016

The suspense behind the close doors makes it charming as the poet' imagination is beautiful and it's that lovely imagination that makes Asim Nehal a nice poet. An amazing poem by Asim Nehal.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2016

Ab mai chahoon aisaa har ek shakhs ko bhi darwaza mile Jo kabhi bhi na khule aur jiska raaz ho gehra... wonderful imagination. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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M. Asim Nehal

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