Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Ek Udas Sham Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tanha tanha shamon mein phirna chupke chupke raton mein rona,
Jane wale wapas na aaye kabhi phir kis liye apne jee ko khona,
Tum jisko shafaq samjhe ho yaro khoon hay mere armanon ka,
Doob rahi sagar mein dekho peyar ki chandi yar ka sona,
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Bisma Mirza 09 November 2015

Such an Amazing one...............! ! ! 10 on 10

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Muhammad Ali 23 October 2015

Bht achi gazal hy narm narm lehjy me. Sudarshan faakir ka ek sher dekhen.. Dunia jisy kehty hn, jadu ka khilona hy mil jaey To mitti hy, kho jaey to sona hy .. ap ki ghazal parh kr acha laga

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

'Brilliant expression. Beautiful ghazel. Thanks for sharing.- - - 10

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Anita Sharma 22 October 2015

such a brill write.loved and liked

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Lajawab Ghazal, ek ek lafz dard mein dooba hua.....10++

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 October 2015

Dil ko choo janewali ek khoobsoorat nazm.

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