Elements Of Love Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Elements Of Love

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The four Phases
Of my life-
Scattered over them
Like the elements of cosmos,
Like the elements of life.


The Fire in the attractive and active
The Water in the Creative and Positive
The Air in the Submissive and Sensitive
The Ground in the Selective and Sportive
All in the Space within me
Along this time line! !

(1) The Soil Of Love

The Soil of love
Sustains my footings,
My existence
On the timeline,
On the Space line-
That extends over births,
That extends along Earths-
Yet to be born upon!

The Soil of love
Renders Firmness in belief
To mum with love
To Chum with love
To Sir with love
With thy care and nourishment
Delicate and Divine.

(2) The Fluid Of Love

The Fluid of love
Flows down the heart-
Over the
Valley of the dreams,
Over the
Lanes of memory,
Strings of passion,
Strings of emotion
Delicately fingered within Her! !

(3) The Fire Of Love

The Fire of love
Burns with a flame
Bluer each day
With the desire-
Desire of her Soul,
Desire of my Soul-
Passionately wedded in her.

(4) The Breeze Of Love

The Breeze of love
Blows over the Oceans-
Ocean of loneliness,
Ocean of exiles!

The Breeze of love
Brings tenderness into me
Down the valleys of my heart,
Down the corridors of my emptiness
Sensible and warm kisses flood! !

Saturday, March 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,fire,love and life,passion,soil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2016

Down the valleys of my heart. Nice work.

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Thank you Sir for your kind visit and beautiful remarks. Sorry for the delay in responding. Subhas

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Sabita Sahoo 30 May 2016

The four Phases Of my life- Scattered over them Like the elements of cosmos, Like the elements of life. Beautiful expression about the cosmic elements. Love it.

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Thanks dear for your nice remarks. Keep visiting please.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 01 May 2016

A very good and lovely poem Sir. The elements include the four Bhoots, the soil, water, air, fire..leaving the fifth space. Nice concept sir A 10 for the poem. Seems Devi

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Prativa Rani 10 June 2018

Revisiting it was so nice, thanks poet for this deeply stirring poem.

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Prativa Rani 10 June 2018

Oh I love this poem so much. Revisitiing it after a few months.

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

On the Space line- That extends over births, That extends along Earths- so clear expressed how everything is connected through love. Enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing! 10++++

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

On the Space line- That extends over births, That extends along Earths- so clear expressed how everything is connected through love. Enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing!

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D Priyanka Singh 31 October 2017

Down the valleys of my heart, Down the corridors of my emptiness Sensible and warm kisses flood! ! Lovely poem shared. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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