Embroidery Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Embroidery

Rating: 5.0


Green hills
embroidered
on the ripples
winding around the castle
of the little mermaid
toward the upstream
of the loving stream
Ah, God's handiwork, splendid!

Embroidery
Monday, February 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love,spring
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Early spring is the air. When I walked along the Little Moon River located in the north-west of my city at weekend, I was surprised (a pleasure kind) by the new water of the spring. Then I wrote down the little verse. The photo was a shot on the scenery I saw at that moment.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Tye 07 March 2017

Really beautiful poem, nature is the greatest piece of embroidery ever created.

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Cigeng Zhang 09 March 2017

Thanks you liked the little poem!

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Pamela Sinicrope 06 March 2017

Nice poem. You captured both the image and the feeling. Well done.

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Cigeng Zhang 09 March 2017

Hi Pamela, thanks for your kind comment!

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 February 2017

Hi Cigeng, Wonderful poem on nature- the wonders of nature. But, more than your poem, the pic! ! . Who would not turn a poet, watching such a scenic beauty! ! ! ! Wow! ! ! Exquisitely captured. Of course, He is the better poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! We are all worthless before him. But your poem is no less! Green hills embroidered on the ripples winding around the castle of the little mermaid The embroidery of green hills we can see in the pic. But a castle with the ripples of green gills winding around it and the little mermaid in the castle. A metaphor of par excellence... A fairy tale opening up.. Now I take a second look at the pic and see, sure, the castle...... And the li'l mermaid sleeping inside the castle is none other than Cigeng! ! A sprightly 10+++++ toward the upstream of the loving stream Ah, God's handiwork, splendid!

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Cigeng Zhang 27 February 2017

What a nice remark on my little work! New spring gives us new vigor. In return for this, we're penning for the beauty of nature here. Thanks for your warmth and beautiful sharing. Much appreciated.

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