Emptiness In Full Bloom Poem by Rini Shibu

Emptiness In Full Bloom

Rating: 4.8


You have everything
Yet lacking something
Full of happiness
Still heart is aching
Smiling faces are around
But you wear a plastic smile
Love is shown by all
Still there is emptiness
In the midst of crowd
You are feeling lonely
In the noisy place
hearing only your voice
In the silence you hear
the voice of your soul
Do you feel what I feel now

Monday, July 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dev Anand 22 July 2017

But you wear a plastic smile Still there is emptiness In the silence you hear the voice of your soul Do you feel what I feel now Yes i feel your emptiness. This emptiness you describe is very true.. thank you dev.

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thanks Dev for your comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2017

A beautiful poem having psychologically sound. One can't feel emptiness unless concentration of mind. Well done dear Rini, thank u for posting this jem....10

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thanks a lot Mr. Kumar

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M Sagnik Das 16 July 2017

lovely poem mam...i luv it! ! ! my situation...

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thank you Sagnik..

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? plastic smile an apt meanings encoded line,

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thank for your comments

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Lamar Cole 11 July 2017

Very heartfelt and emotional poem.

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Rini Shibu 22 July 2017

Thank you so much Lam

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