Empty Poem by Rini Shibu

Empty

Rating: 5.0


You say am your queen
Then why this heart you steal
You make me empty
With your love you tempt me
Suddenly when you leave me
Emotionally drained you make me

Saturday, August 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 26 January 2021

No smooth entry and exits in love. One should learn balancing the life between love and pain. Thought provoking poem.5***

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2020

Love and pain! ! Very common on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aqua Flower 10 September 2019

Love that comes and goes always leaves one empty. A heartfelt poem.

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Susan Williams 24 August 2019

Sounds like love came for a visit. Well done- the sorrow is not over-dramatized but is effectively communicated to your reader. Excellent write

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Lamar Cole 10 August 2019

This is a very good heartfelt poem with a sadful tone.

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