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You should never have covered it with a shroud
Hoping to find a cage of darkness
With an invisible lantern
Singing the song of light.

July 2010 Hyderabad India

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Lalitha iyer 02 August 2010

That is the beauty of the Soul or the Invisible Spirit within.......Yet, dont you think the body too have finer elements of nature.........Remember Einstein's E=mc2, , , , , , matter and energy are reversible........may be the body too have extremely delicate equation with the spirit within..........

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Theodora Onken 01 August 2010

i like the way that you think and this poem speaks volumes in so few words, Cordially, Theo

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You should never have covered it with a shroud Hoping to find a cage of darkness With an invisible lantern Singing the song of light. ....nothing can be achieved in hollowness. nice poem sir....10

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