! Encouraging Comments! Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

I am a poet

whose heart is filled

with much sentiments

enthused by the influx

of thoughts from my mind

yet how can I convey it

in truest poetic form

when I can't construct

it in most subtle way

in the language of poetry?



I am a poet

who write poems

the way as I feel

those innate thoughts

and sentiments within

this soul of sensitivities

stimulated by emotions

triggered by stimuli

both intrinsic and extrinsic

inspirations bad and good



I am a poet

whose compositions

are raw and imperfect

yet through posting

in various poetic sites

have been criticized

in constructive manner

as varied comments compile

by co-poets and poetess

enthusing
inspiration