Epitaph Poem by Tom Billsborough

Epitaph

Rating: 5.0


The oxygen of hope expires
I shudder
And my past breath
fades from the mirror,
A disappearing ghost,
Leaving alone
Death's inscrutable smile.
So close my eyes
My file lies in the future,
If at all,
My friends, who stall
For now within the endless present.

Tuesday, September 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Don't be afraid. I'm very much alive. Just a reflection.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crayon Poet 25 September 2018

Death loses its arrogant grip on you as you pass into new life, your serene insights and courage fully intact for a ride into the unknown - these compact lines are loaded with intriguing substance!

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Crayon Poet 25 September 2018

Good going! - your enhanced adrenaline flow while being cared for by the nurse might have been the greatest sign of your ongoing vigor ;)

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Tom Billsborough 25 September 2018

Thanks, Crayon. As I told you it did appear fairly quickly on New poems. I did go to the Doctor's today and was given a clean bill of health. Mind you my pulse rate was a little higher than normal. But the nurse holding my hand was very attractive! She might just qualify for tonight's fantasy!

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Richard Wlodarski 25 September 2018

Thank God for your notes, Tom. You had me scared to death. Your poem is full of life. I like it. A lot!

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Richard Wlodarski 29 September 2018

Tom, meditation would be a much better trade off!

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Tom Billsborough 25 September 2018

you know someone said I was immortal or was it immoral! No, I seem to carry on despite my smoking habit. It does help my concentration when I'm writing, so I risk the trade off. So far so good!

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

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