Eternity Poem by Shakira Nandini

Eternity

Rating: 5.0


To feel your mouth
on top of my mouth
your succulent lips
pressed into my lips
both of our tongues
speaking in tongues
feeling the weight of your body
pushing down on top of my body
feeling each other
dissolve into each other
souls mating forever
hope this feeling ends; never.

Thursday, January 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: romance,sexy
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Binayakumar Mohanty 09 November 2017

Souls mating forever Hope the feelings end never. Summing up sensuality to spirituality.Superb.Thanks for sharing.

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Sochukwu Ivye 29 October 2017

The latter lines are most moving of all. A well penned erotica, dear poet.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Frankness of eternity deserves 10+++I loved the poem. Thanks. Binaya

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