Muse
You are
My sweet heart
Giving pleasure
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Interesting poetic form Chandra - there are so many with which I am unfamiliar. This is good.
You have created a nice Ethere breaking your lines appropriately in a natural way. That shows your command of the language and great skill. Beautifully rendered.
Beautiful write. We can learn many new things from you..A Great Ethere! Love to learn always something new...Thank your for sharing with us.
Chandra, you familiarize us with new forms and styles of verse! As you feel, Muse is our pleasurable companion, taking us to wonderful stretches of fancy and fun, and helping us drown our little griefs! A great Ethere! !
A brilliant addaption beautifully put.