Some people intrude into your life
And cause a huge impact on you
They will throw you up to the sky
When you try to catch the stars
You realise your foot is not on the ground
And no one to hold you down
By then your heart is already been squeezed
And last drop of blood is drained
You become pale and insane
There is none true in the world
Either believed or to be trusted
Even your shadow leaves you in the dark
There is none true in the world Either believed or to be trusted Even your shadow leaves you in the dark It's correct mostly but exceptions are always there. An impressive poem.
The last line is the epitome of this magnificent piece of poetry! Thanks for sharing....10
A descriptive picture painted of abandonment and betrayal- - A very powerful write, Rini!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Loved the last line. You have left your footprints even if you cannot see them.++10