Even Shadow Leaves Poem by Rini Shibu

Even Shadow Leaves

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Some people intrude into your life
And cause a huge impact on you
They will throw you up to the sky
When you try to catch the stars
You realise your foot is not on the ground
And no one to hold you down
By then your heart is already been squeezed
And last drop of blood is drained
You become pale and insane
There is none true in the world
Either believed or to be trusted
Even your shadow leaves you in the dark

Sunday, February 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 26 June 2018

Loved the last line. You have left your footprints even if you cannot see them.++10

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

There is none true in the world Either believed or to be trusted Even your shadow leaves you in the dark It's correct mostly but exceptions are always there. An impressive poem.

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Rini Shibu 16 April 2018

There are exceptions..Thanks Akhtarji

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2018

Squeezed! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2018

The last line is the epitome of this magnificent piece of poetry! Thanks for sharing....10

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Rini Shibu 13 February 2018

Thanks Dillip..! ! !

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Practicing Poetess 11 February 2018

A descriptive picture painted of abandonment and betrayal- - A very powerful write, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 12 February 2018

Thanks dear poetess

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