Evening Rose Poem by karen sinclair

Evening Rose

Rating: 5.0


The dusty window frames her form
Silhouetting her fragility as evening falls
With hands as gnarled oak
Clasping the unvarnished rocking chair
Her painfully crooked feet gently cause a methodical tone
Upon the now jaded rug...
Hypnotic as time...

Head relaxed tilted window bound her mind caresses visions of times
Long gone...

Where once there was enthusiasm, adoration
Frantic breaths within desired moments
Where she had grasped in exploration
Whilst he relished her soft young form....

During those poignant snapshots
Within a moment of staid meandering
Her eyes fall upon her now withered hand
A stark reminder of where she sits now...

She closes her eyes
So the fading light seeps through her now
Wafer thin lids...

Her world now a Rose tint of red hot passionate kisses
That moisten her lashes
As she inhales the sweet definite musk
of him...

Cleansed purely
Whitewashed
She raises, deserting her now obsolete shell

No more sordid pain....

Encouraged by him still so preciously young
All that she so cherished

She attempts to hide within her aged hands
Yet.. they are fresh...unblemished by time

As cotton sheets in a warm summers breeze
The couple share warm Rose kisses
Moist eyelashes and
Eternity.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Normand 03 September 2012

This is a very nice poem.Old age is a thief that will be dealt with one day. I guess what makes it so painful is we are supposed to live forever.Our spirits know this but or bodies don't.They are from two different places. Good job.

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Alla Simone 02 July 2012

Tenderness is expressed well in this piece. Also reads as a bittersweet tale of time.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 28 June 2012

youth is a wonder to behold as is age itself...but love...romance not a chance one could ever lose a blink or a wink... you write as if you know or knew this person...a closeness is read within your words...mmmm...who is she..ha ha... well let the woman into paradise...if only for a moment...I smiled while reading...and relaxed a bit more..ty kwane

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