Every Moon Sets -04: The Poisoned Sword Of Desire Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Every Moon Sets -04: The Poisoned Sword Of Desire

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You stabbed me

From behind

My shapeless image

With the most dreadful

Weapon of the ages.



The knife of shadows

Slaying me behind

The brightest shrine.



You were the pale priest

Making me quiver

With the pain

Of centuries of

Forced widowhood.



Till I trembled

Like a blue animal

In the wisp of coldness

Poisoned with lonely

Swords of desire.

Every Moon Sets -04: The Poisoned Sword Of Desire
Sunday, October 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,loneliness,longing,pain,painful,poison,road,separation,sword
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

In the wisp of coldness Poisoned with lonely Swords of desire. Loved the imaginative poem very much. 10++++ for it.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

With the pain Of centuries of Forced widowhood. Great imagery dear poet. Thanks for the poem. 10++

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

ou stabbed me From behind My shapeless image With the most dreadful Weapon of the ages. Pain in real words, penned so nicely. Thanks. 10++ for it.

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

In the wisp of coldness Poisoned with lonely Swords of desire. Loved the poem very much. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 October 2017

Thank you dear Anita for the lovely remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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