Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,339 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

Every Night Before I Retire To The Bed - Poem by Ali Sabry

Every night before I retire to the bed to sleep I go to the veranda for look at the moon and the stars for remember you honey cause you are so far from me, I remember our beautiful moments that we lived it each other from a long time before you are leaving me alone, I remember your beautiful white comfortable face, Your beautiful angels eyes and then your an angel face comes to me from the moon from the far space in the high with a white horse, Comes to me to take me with you to go to the high and forget everything and the whole world, To live our beautiful times again each other only in the far space near the stars and the planets.


Comments about Every Night Before I Retire To The Bed by Ali Sabry

  • (12/3/2013 2:45:00 PM)


    I can feel your heartfelt yearning tn this poem. I hope that you find peace and love in your life soon. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/22/2013 6:54:00 AM)


    Nice! GBY! Need more. Like me. (Report) Reply

  • Freewill Amon (11/27/2012 1:26:00 PM)


    Honestly friend, you need to improve your English for better writing. Your poems are interesting but not properly translated. Like in this one, you use 'for' in place of 'to.' All the best buddy.. (Report) Reply

    Nicole Duckery Nicole Duckery (4/30/2015 2:15:00 PM)

    I totally agree

  • Olataga ielua (11/7/2012 9:34:00 PM)


    i like this poem... it remind me of my best friend thank you... nice poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2012 11:19:00 PM)


    Nice attempt...remembering your beloved after seeing the moon and the stars and missing her.Hope you get your beloved.All the best. (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2012 11:38:00 AM)


    Sir, thank you for sharing your words.
    Wonderful! !
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  • Robin Bennett (7/22/2012 4:30:00 PM)


    It's obvious you are smitten, but I think the poem would be more improved it you dug deeped and told us what it is about her and why you have these feelings. Avoid the cheap cliches and try not to fust just love letter words. Close your eyes and picture her and what is it down deep each little nuance and think about her that makes you have this love for her. (Report) Reply

  • Nurain Ali-balogun (7/22/2012 10:37:00 AM)


    Juan's right Ali, I think you have so much in your head to share and pour out. And probably because of the emotional attachment you have to the situation, your ideas are not well co-ordinated. Your word come out like a guy having an oral conversation with a beautiful girl he loves. If you are to bring all that into poetry, you should take it slowly. Each line must have a purpose and connect with the next, each line must have a HEART of its own. Try doing that and you'll be phenomenal. (Report) Reply

  • Juan Guzman (6/22/2012 4:25:00 PM)


    I'm sorry but from the poems i have seen, you are not writing poetry but love letters, and this is the closest one to poetry i have seen so far. Some elements in resemble poetry and some don't. you havr to remember that you can not just write lines and place it in a paragraph. Each line should have a specific meaning. i sudjest you read more poems and study english a bit more. Then come up with your own style of writing or choose one you like. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Aastha Poddar (6/16/2012 4:45:00 AM)


    Actually, I do not like romantic poems. I am really sorry about that. (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2012 1:57:00 AM)


    Great poem man!

    This is my favorite part;

    I remember your beautiful white comfortable face, Your beautiful angels eyes and then your an angel face comes to me from the moon from the far space in the high with a white horse, Comes to me to take me with you to go to the high and forget everything and the whole world

    I love the imagery you make with 'beautiful white comfortable face!

    Keep it up!
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011



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