yoonoos peerbocus

Gold Star - 21,598 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Hint At What Is Beautiful? - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
napalm asphyxiated victims
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
and heart shuts out desire to let in
consciousness.

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (6/18/2018 12:23:00 PM)


    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,

    Wonderful poem Yoonoos. Endowed with humane virtue, is the greatest gift of life.
    A full score for you Sir.
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (6/18/2018 12:18:00 PM)


    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,

    Wonderful poem Yoonoos.
    (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (6/18/2018 5:35:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem unveiling the humanity with fine verses. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Richard Jarboe (6/13/2018 1:50:00 PM)


    Greetings Yoonoos,
    Those who offer what is real themselves is the key to what is beautiful is it not? Take care,
    ric
    (Report) Reply

  • Roxanne Herrera (6/11/2018 3:31:00 PM)


    https:m.poemhunter.compoemi-cant-be-sad (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/10/2018 12:22:00 PM)


    Brilliantly expressed. A poem with nice theme has been astutely presented. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report) Reply

  • Tariq Alkaritty (6/4/2018 7:14:00 AM)


    Such a deep verse counting as food for thought as well as an appreciation for the peace prone people. (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (6/4/2018 4:37:00 AM)


    Beautiful is the moment when sunlit world fades away and with it mind made mirror…. heart shuts out desire to let in consciousness…….A beautifully penned beautiful poem! Loved reading it..10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/30/2018 4:48:00 AM)


    A very readable work and most enjoyable..thank you for sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (5/29/2018 12:37:00 AM)


    A great thoughtful poem, loved its simplicity. (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (5/28/2018 3:02:00 AM)


    A great, meaningful poem on what is beautiful in this world. (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (5/25/2018 1:02:00 AM)


    wow wonderful words-

    veiling ambition with face of
    humanity.Beautiful is the moment
    when sunlit world fades away
    And with it mind made mirror
    While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
    and heart shuts out desire to let in
    consciousness.

    great 10++++++
    (Report) Reply

  • Nndanduleni Nelson Nemaranzhe (5/24/2018 6:48:00 AM)


    I surely am excited of the creativity that dawned at your heart and you hesitated not to put it on paper. This is poetry at its best... (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/18/2018 2:19:00 AM)


    veiling ambition with face of
    humanity.......touching expression with nice theme. An outstanding poem with positivity shared astutely.10
    (Report) Reply

  • Michel Angelo (5/17/2018 11:45:00 AM)


    Loved your work. Dr. Manas Roy (Michel Angelo- poet name) (Report) Reply

  • Britte Ninad (5/17/2018 12:55:00 AM)


    nice...Beautiful is....let in consciousness.

    ++10
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  • Rajnish Manga (5/11/2018 6:48:00 AM)


    Outstanding poem showing the brighter side of humanity full of beautiful images.
    Thanks a lot for sharing it, yoonoos sahab.
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  • Raj Swami (5/10/2018 1:22:00 PM)


    I give 10
    If you have time please read my poem's
    (Report) Reply

  • Raj Swami (5/10/2018 1:21:00 PM)


    having grateful heart is a beautiful thing....thanks for the share of this insightful poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 2, 2016


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