yoonoos peerbocus

Gold Star - 10,605 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Hint At What Is Beautiful? - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
napalm asphyxiated victims
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
and heart shuts out desire to let in
consciousness.

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Comments about A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Seema Devi Sharma (9/18/2017 9:31:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem. Thank you poet. (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Sahoo (9/15/2017 8:31:00 AM)


    Great piece of art.
    Thanks poet.
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  • Rose Lu (9/6/2017 9:49:00 PM)


    Beautiful is the 'thank you'. - -I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Sahoo (9/4/2017 11:49:00 PM)


    veiling ambition with face of
    humanity.Beautiful is the moment
    when sunlit world fades away
    Beautifully penned.
    Thanks poet.
    (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (9/1/2017 10:21:00 AM)


    Beautiful is the moment
    when sunlit world fades away
    And with it mind made mirror
    While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
    and heart shuts out desire to let in
    consciousness.

    Wow beautiful poem.
    Amazes.
    10+++++
    (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2017 2:06:00 AM)


    indeed it is beautiful :) (Report) Reply

  • (8/15/2017 1:52:00 PM)


    Beautiful....thank you (Report) Reply

  • Mary Skarpathiotaki (8/5/2017 9:57:00 AM)


    Ομορφιά δεν είναι το γρήγορο συμπέρασμα ούτε η εξωτερική εμφάνιση! Σας βαθμολογώ10+ (Report) Reply

  • Gurleen Kaur Narang (8/1/2017 2:32:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (7/23/2017 9:00:00 AM)


    so beautiful! yes these words. so insighful (Report) Reply

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (7/19/2017 1:26:00 PM)


    Yes, it is beautiful, even talking about those things. I see beauty in everything. (Report) Reply

  • (7/16/2017 10:45:00 AM)


    Your theme is reflection, outwardly and inwardly. You say that beauty is self-reflection unveiled of delusion and graps the 'inside'. Beutiful is your sentiment. I unfortunately know too many people who will never be capable of this, for their distorted self, the product of thieir 'mirror' lives, is too powerful a force. (Report) Reply

  • Hassan Hayati (7/12/2017 5:21:00 AM)


    I must read it times and times (Report) Reply

  • Berlyn Estimada (7/10/2017 9:32:00 AM)


    Great comparism! You really give us a hint of what is real beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Sara Militello (7/10/2017 2:01:00 AM)


    Nice use of metaphor! Beautiful is the 'thank you' Wrapped with gratitude, Love this! and To nurse with love and humility napalm asphyxiated victims in our stained world. I give this a ten.

    veiling ambition with face of
    humanity.
    (Report) Reply

  • Schrijfidee Coray (7/6/2017 7:21:00 AM)


    top poem for making aware (Report) Reply

  • (7/5/2017 9:01:00 AM)


    Your free verse always deliver the meaning, the message and the emotions. Very well written my dear friend. (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2017 9:40:00 PM)


    Beautiful is the wondrous beauty of this profound piece of poetry! Kudos all the way! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (6/24/2017 11:32:00 PM)


    The concept of beauty redefined with a tinge of humility and humaneness. Thanks a lot. Today, there is a greater need to imbibe these values than ever before, (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/23/2017 3:51:00 PM)


    'Thank You' and 'Please' bring peace and humility. It has been nicely painted in this poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 2, 2016


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