yoonoos peerbocus

Gold Star - 25,806 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Hint At What Is Beautiful? - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
napalm asphyxiated victims
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
and heart shuts out desire to let in
consciousness.

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Luke Hobbs (8/11/2018 3:34:00 PM)


    There are several phrases in here that seem to pirouette upon themselves. Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (7/29/2018 10:27:00 AM)


    This is a masterpiece...work of art! My great pleasure reading it time and again my friend! (Report) Reply

  • (7/28/2018 11:26:00 AM)


    Relate more to the first stanza- -which, to me, is outstanding.
    Second stanza may be referring to some form of meditation, with which I am unfamiliar,
    In any event, high-level work.
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  • Chris Embrick (7/24/2018 12:57:00 PM)


    True beauty goes beyond visual sight. Well penned and insightful. Thanks yoonoos (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/23/2018 2:07:00 PM)


    veiling ambition with face of
    humanity.Beautiful is the moment
    when sunlit world fades away
    And with it mind made mirror
    While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
    and heart shuts out desire to let in
    consciousness.........so touching with nice theme. It is really a beautiful poem for which I made it second visit.
    (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (7/20/2018 11:37:00 AM)


    Insightful and creative. This poem initiates a myriad of differing feelings and thoughts. This is what great poetry is supposed to do. (Report) Reply

    (7/21/2018 3:18:00 AM)

    a lot of thanks

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (7/15/2018 12:53:00 AM)


    A masterpiece! My great pleasure reading it time and again! (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2018 4:09:00 AM)


    Beautiful poems to sing (Report) Reply

  • (7/12/2018 6:39:00 PM)


    Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Petals Azureblue (7/9/2018 1:00:00 PM)


    Beautiful is this poem too.
    Heart shut out desire to let in consciousness...
    just feel and act don't think and withhold compassion...empathy
    Thank you poet.10+++
    (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (7/3/2018 3:52:00 PM)


    over 715 comments see how B E A U T I F U L RRRR UUUUUUUUUUUUUU (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (7/3/2018 3:50:00 PM)


    and you are as beautiful as you think
    and A BIG THANK YOU FOR THE BEAUTY
    in all hearts you bring
    ding dong ding
    beauty isn't it
    tis MUSIC
    (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (6/25/2018 8:24:00 PM)


    Thought-provoking short poem which unwinds its secrets slowly in repeated reading. Well crafted. (Report) Reply

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (6/18/2018 12:23:00 PM)


    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,

    Wonderful poem Yoonoos. Endowed with humane virtue, is the greatest gift of life.
    A full score for you Sir.
    (Report) Reply

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (6/18/2018 12:18:00 PM)


    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,

    Wonderful poem Yoonoos.
    (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (6/18/2018 5:35:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem unveiling the humanity with fine verses. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Richard Jarboe (6/13/2018 1:50:00 PM)


    Greetings Yoonoos,
    Those who offer what is real themselves is the key to what is beautiful is it not? Take care,
    ric
    (Report) Reply

  • Roxanne Herrera (6/11/2018 3:31:00 PM)


    https:m.poemhunter.compoemi-cant-be-sad (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/10/2018 12:22:00 PM)


    Brilliantly expressed. A poem with nice theme has been astutely presented. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report) Reply

  • Tariq Alkaritty (6/4/2018 7:14:00 AM)


    Such a deep verse counting as food for thought as well as an appreciation for the peace prone people. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 2, 2016


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