yoonoos peerbocus

Silver Star - 3,636 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Hint At What Is Beautiful? - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
napalm asphyxiated victims
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
and heart shuts out desire to let in
consciousness.

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Pramodsai Thati (4/26/2017 9:48:00 AM)


    Good one...thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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  • Lubinda Lubinda (4/25/2017 12:33:00 AM)


    Awesome poem. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Buyi Newton Philip (4/20/2017 11:14:00 AM)


    wow isn't that amazing....... yes surely it is very lovely. (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2017 8:19:00 AM)


    Really wonderful and well presented (Report) Reply

  • Hope White (3/30/2017 12:18:00 PM)


    this is greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2017 8:21:00 AM)

    No hint, a statement!
    I commiserate you with abundant plaudits, this brilliant poem that you scrawled his magnificent! (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2017 6:27:00 PM)


    Great thoughts, great poem................................................................ (Report) Reply

  • Ansh Naveen (1/21/2017 6:52:00 PM)

    Poem
    This is an amazing poem (Report) Reply

  • (1/8/2017 4:12:00 AM)


    Beautiful is the poet with a heart of gold who shares his humility. My first read of your poetry, and very deserving of 10. I look forward to reading more. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (1/1/2017 2:45:00 PM)

    tom allport
    a tantalising poem of the realities of life today. (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2016 5:03:00 PM)


    (A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos paperbacks.)
    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,

    veiling ambition with face of
    humanity. Beautiful is the moment

    ____________________________
    **About the good, and the needs of humanity. A subject so enormous that the poet could only hint at it. A poem that is gorgeous in every aspect.
    (Report) Reply

  • (11/18/2016 4:31:00 PM)

    The Sky and its beauty
    Let the stars mingle in the evening sky to make us aware other worlds do exist yet to be discovered. (Report) Reply

  • Mark Sebert (9/30/2016 9:33:00 AM)

    Good message
    We need peace prone people, love the concept and the alliteration. Sometimes it is so hard to step out of the day to day and the mundane to lend a helping hand. (Report) Reply

  • Tapas Baidya (9/23/2016 6:38:00 AM)


    Beautiful. The poem speaks about love, peace... (Report) Reply

  • Tapas Baidya (9/23/2016 6:35:00 AM)


    বেশ লাগল । Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2016 4:42:00 AM)


    beautifully written poem (Report) Reply

  • Brenda Jensen (9/4/2016 12:24:00 PM)


    this write is beautiful as your soul that carries it and shares with us all (Report) Reply

  • Anitah Muwanguzi (7/31/2016 11:56:00 PM)


    Thanks for sharing something so positively inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Joel Aboderin (7/13/2016 11:32:00 AM)


    wrapped with gratitude...this poem is wrapped with good diction.Great (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (6/5/2016 10:13:00 AM)


    Beautiful is the 'thank you'...Wrapped with gratitude, ...Who go out of their way...To nurse shrapnel scalded victims.../..So...heartfelt...&....humane. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 2, 2016


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