Peace Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir


Rating: 4.8

A beautiful singing bird
Imprisoned in a golden cage
Waiting to be freed
Since the hominoid age!

Leslie Rodriguez 24 May 2009

wonderful piece. amazingly long. :)

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Yelena M. 25 May 2009

Peace is simple, peace is often so much like a bird in a cage for humanity, thanks for this beautiful metaphor here, Naseer.10+++ Best wishes. Amary.

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Aijaz Asif 30 May 2009

a short and very beautiful write indeed and I hope that beautiful little bird will be freed soon or it might be not coz its the game of life and when there is no game then the life will end....thanks for sharing many, many 10'ssssss and A+++++++++ rgds asif

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Karl White 14 June 2009

hey man that was grate i like how it flowed to gather good job

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Ejaz Khan 25 June 2009

May be just a myth like unicorns and dragons! Written with zeal! Regards

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Alison Cassidy 06 January 2010

In four simple lines you capture a world of truth and beauty. May your bird of peace open her wings and soar into the bright sky. Exceptional write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 December 2009

Peace Peace Peace Most scare and rare the only savior … 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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bye bye... bye bye 19 December 2009

Golden or not, it is still a cage... and a bird is supposed to soar high up in the sky... it has been a long, long waiting for this bird... will it ever be freed... these words are painful to read... because they are true...

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Yaci Pachenco 16 December 2009

not every thing in life can be freed...sometimes it is for the good... there would not be life is there was only peace... we need the bad to live life... something to fight for...

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Antonio Liao 09 December 2009

One of the novel poem i ever read.....God bless....10++++++++++++

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