Every Poet's Vision Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Every Poet's Vision

Rating: 4.7


Alone under a tree, a vision comes to me
People will look at me, with satisfaction I can see
I will smile back at them, whoever they may be
Until we smile all along, smiling happily

I walk towards home with a pen in my hand
Scribbled all the thoughts that come to my mind
Till the stars in the sky, appear, then out of sight
Tomorrow and onwards continue I will write

That was many years ago, cause now I am old
My works are accepted, that is I was told
As I sit in my chair, with my hair growing white
People look at me with a smile in their hearts

Though now I am about to bid farewell to the world
I have no regrets, It's my time to be called
I will leave feeling glad with a smile on my lips
Thankful for the happines, I was able to give.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phillip Joshua Jimenez 12 April 2011

You see you can't just leave the Planet Earth until you've invested much in your talent. By all means, you should invest whatever God has given you for His glory because when the time comes when you will be standing before His White Throne, you will give an account about that in front of Him.... Nice poem, sis!

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Bernadette Inocencio 26 March 2011

very well done! ! ! this what you really want as i remember....

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Patti Masterman 25 March 2011

Wow, Naida, this is really some excellent writing.

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Leas Celyn 04 March 2011

this IS every poets vision. to leave a peice of themselves for the benefit of someone else, to invoke thoughts, feelings, actions. great job and +10

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Aldo Kraas 24 February 2011

your character shows in the poem. you character is a happy person that always thinks possitive and never seems to compain about anything. I believe that you love your life

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Beautifully written.. this poem expresses every poets vision...! .as its is said poets has dual life after death..one in the heavens and the other in the works left behind....

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Kevin Halls 07 February 2012

A very enjoyable poem and it sums up how all us poets would like to be remembered. Well done!

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Chidori Storm 21 December 2011

That is every poet's dream and vision. This is a very good poem. I like it. It flows almost like a song.

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 October 2011

Very nice..a very dignified vision a vision of a true poet..a poet with a big heart.. really nice.... really inspiring...pls do read my ' A Poet's Aim, A Poet's Dream' You're like a silent river Naid....

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Silly Artist 12 April 2011

Wonderful poem. There is no need for improvements apart from that you continue to write. Each poet's style is unique and they way theywrite is how they define themselves. -Continue spreading your words of truth around the world =D

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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