Everytime When I Think Of You Comments

'You're the sun that lights up my sky the wind that keeps me cool on a hot summer day and sweet incense that keeps me on a natural high' Rachel Ann Butler

ap kafi duur ho........soch mukhtalif hai........great piece of reality

Reads like love is in the air, with the incense

A wonderful poem and great read

describes vividly the feeling of immersion in the growing emotions of the spring time of a new love. Took me on a wonderful journey to its presence, an excellent piece thank you for sharing I particularly liked the imagery of the laced fingers describes the intimacy of holding hands perfectly. Keep up the good work.

pleasant feel................everytime when i think of you....i ask myself, when will you come in ma palm as a glitterin dew......sebastine

nice! real! sweet! its a good one

A very lovely poem...well written and expressed nicely from deep thoughts..10 ***

i lost in the details but got the essence. will read it again with mind's presence lolz all the best

composed Beautifully Keep going!

lil girl has a big heart! ! ! ! ! ! and there is many more love and floating through your words......... nice poem dear.....keep writing

lil girl has a big heart! ! ! ! ! ! and there is many more love and floating through your words......... nice poem dear.....keep writing

Beautiful poem. Lil Island Gal!