Evidence Of An Imbalance Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Evidence Of An Imbalance

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Naturally...
If someone accepts something has no substance,
Because of teachings believed.
They are going to be shocked,
To find the opposite.
But an ignorance has blocked its benefit.

And the one who profits from this blocking,
Is the one who created tainted beliefs.
Even though in reality...
Neither receives a complete and wholesome experience,
From these actions to increase a shallowed authority.

And this reflects on the detriment of one's comprehension!
To become indoctrinated into a falsity believed,
Ultimately feeds a diseasing mind to unwind in time!
To leave evidence of an imbalance.

And this consequence is irreversible!
A damage done is what it is...
Unsalvageable!
Worthless to others.
But within itself...
Thought a priceless and much sought,
Rare commodity.
Everyone dreams to possess.
With the best of propaganda and marketing accessed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 August 2008

well said, Lawrence...mental imbalance is a desease...in speech...in action...in one's writes also...a good poem with much implied meaning 10 +

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