Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,068 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Excess Is Bad - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

“Excess of everything is bad”
It is observed and well said
The greed spoils mentality of person
He stoops so below without any reason

Person must gain wealth to certain limit
More of it can earn wrath and seal the fate
There may be increase in family quarrels
Inside home and nothing may go well

Even cruelty, to certain extent, is tolerated
Suppression is also sometimes disregarded
So much of it can prove disastrous for king also
The public may rise in revolt for downfall to bring

Restraint and patience is must
You should believe and trust also
Hard work is needed to gain everything
Too much greed is likely to harm for nothing

The ill fame may make man unpopular
The people may keep some distance and keep him far
He will never be able to gain same position
He will worsen all kinds of relation

Comments about Excess Is Bad by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:31:00 PM)

    true, true true

    Blanca Woody15 minutes ago
    wonderful massage like it
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:30:00 PM)

    It ok

    Sylin Moanet17 minutes ago
    Very public opinion
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2014 7:05:00 PM)

    “Excess of everything is bad”
    It is observed and well said
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, January 27, 2014

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