Ramesh T A

Gold Star - 47,751 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

Expecting Rain On A Busy Day! - Poem by Ramesh T A

Hazy Sky leaving no room for blue colour
Whole day town is drowsy under shade!
Usual business does not stop anywhere;
But nothing in particular touches all sure!

Only if good amount of rain comes here,
All will be happy to dance in rain sure...!
Such a feeling surely lingers in everyone's
Inner heart and wait all for that moment!

Rain in hot day is surely a great pleasure
To enjoy with friends outside somewhere!
Such a joy surely no one can miss in life
Full of monotony, expectation and fatigue!

A sense of relief once in a while comes so, if
Rain comes on a busy day and drenches all!

Topic(s) of this poem: rain


Comments about Expecting Rain On A Busy Day! by Ramesh T A

  • Bharati Nayak (8/27/2015 9:06:00 AM)


    Hazy sky leaving no room for blue colour
    Whole day town is drowsy under shade
    Usual business does not stop anywhere
    But nothing in particular touches all sure
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    A sense of relief once in a while comes so, if
    If rain comes on a busy day and drenches all.- - - -Only a lovely rain can can uplift the spirit that has been dull and drowsy. Nice flow of words the poem is full of promise for a lovely rain.
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    Ramesh T A Ramesh T A (8/27/2015 12:46:00 PM)

    Thank you for your nice comment on my poem, my friend!

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015



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