Failed Guardian Poem by You... don't... want me...
Failed Guardian
With the wings I have been granted
I do not fly straight up to heaven
Instead I am here watching over you
Although I wish I never knew
Just had sad I have made you
I left you there with no one to hold
Now you sit there with my ring of gold
You are now shaking with tears
You cry out but nobody hears
You grab a knife
And end your own life
Now I am the one who starts to cry
While I float there and watch you die
I scream for help, but no one comes
No one is there to save the one I love...
Together we are floating to heaven
And you thank god for this gift you have been given.
I called you ‘stupid’ and said life was worth liven
You said ‘NO’ this was a gift you had been given
That this was a gift from heaven.
Really nice piece of work, Janay. So poignant, heartfelt. You're so young it's sweet! I am going to read some more of your stuff to really get a feel for you and i promise i will get back to you when i've done so Clare x
really a nice thing to read......and you have shared your thoughts........how beautiful in this tender age you writing........always be positive.........
nicely written poem and very interesting..smooth flow to read the stanzas..good job...10
I LOVEEEEEEE IT EXPLAINS ALOT OF WHAT IM GOING THREW I DIDNT EVEN HAVE TO READ THE 3RD LINE B4 I KNEW I WAS GOING TO LOVE IT I THINK YOU HAVE A GIFT AND I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING CUZ UR AMAZING AND HOPEFULLY YOU'LL BECOME FAMOUS ONE DAY
It makes me cry. I don't think about taking my life..but the ones that did...how much they missed...so saaad
this poem was very influencial for me, it reminded me that life truely is worth living and that there isnt enough time to just give up. if you would, comment anyone of my poems that intrest you? !
Fantastic title, emotive content, and some reasonable rhyme and imagery. Well done! S :)
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 5:08:28 AM # 1.0.0
Wonderful poem very creative and emotive :)