Faith Poem by Darrin McMiller Jr.

Faith



Faith is like a single
Drop of water on the window

Formed from condensation
Slowly sliding down
The pane of glass

And in the background
A forest ablaze

And when the droplet
Finally reaches the bottom
It extinguishes the flame

(Thanks to Terence G. Craddock for the suggestions)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arthur Crissey 21 June 2010

good idea, Darrin. you hit a nerve. it took me a long time to realize how important faith is. it's like money in the bank, if I may use such a vulgar expression. but the basic idea is sound. if you want the reward, you have to put yourself into it. have you read my poem Faith in Mother Earth? I'd be interested in your response. best wishes, arthur crissey

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Lynn Glover 21 June 2010

A beautiful poetic discription of faith, beautiful methaphor and a very good write. Hope you can read my latest 'Caught in a Storm'. thanks Lynn

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Renea Hannah 23 July 2010

I LOVE IT. IT MAKES ME BELIEVE IN THE SMALLIEST THING POTENTIAL TO DO SOMETHING BIG

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Awesome! Like planting a single seed and already seeing a mighty harvest. Such an inspiring poem. Well done.; D

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Miss Rainbow 06 July 2010

it was good very intersting

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 22 June 2010

WOW! Darrin, this poem is truly inspiring as well as enlightening...faith is liken vapor changing to a dropp of water that can extinguish a huge flame.O' my how mind over matter has the power to create great ideas or things. another good poem.

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An intriguing way to write the huge power of faith. An excellent concept.

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