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Walking along a beach,
I search within my soul,
Everything’s out of reach,
I no longer know my goal.

I’d lost my heart,
How could it be?
Alone and forlorn,
I stand by the sea.
I look to the ocean,
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Brian Dorn 09 November 2006
Awesome write, Aisha! An amazing depiction of faith... brilliantly done! ! Brian
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Elya Thorn 06 April 2006
This is such an amazing metaphore, the whole poem, it's so beautiful, so well structured, and in the end you say what it is all about..... Oh, and it flows so easily...and the athmosphere you create during the poem it's just amazing... Going through life.... the hope and the disbelief, then when you find faith... and then you find it again.... AMAZING poem! ! ! ! ! I have to congradulate you on this one! 100000000+! ~~Elya Thorn~~
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