I promise,
You are the only one for me,
And though it pains my heart,
To love you,
Know this,
There is no other pain,
I would rather feel.
I really understand this one, it has reached the reader well, love Duncan X
The forbidden pleasure beneath the pain- that, as such, concludes one of the many mysteries of love. Cheers.
browsing your poems after your comments on mine. I love this simple powerful affirmation. Tim
Wow, short, but really powerful, it's a great statement of love, that we all would like to hear! 10! ! ! ~~Elya Thorn~~
Nice poem. Well, poem based on love does not comes under the category of poetry. A poem should contain messages for society. Love is self-centred issue.
AISHA... THANK YOU FOR SCOPIN' A READ ON MY #'S PIECE...AND YA GOT ME TO THE QUICK, YOUNG LADY....VOTES ARE NUMBERS, SO I HOPE YA DON'T PENALIZE ME ON MY EFFORTS...NOW WOULD YA? NICE WORK...A BROOKFULL OF WORDS WITH AN OCEAN OF PASSION! AND QUITE WORTHY OF A NUMBER...WHICH WOULD BE THE # 10 CATCH UP TO YOU AGAIN....!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
AISHA... THANK YOU FOR SCOPIN' A READ ON MY #'S PIECE...AND YA GOT ME TO THE QUICK, YOUNG LADY....VOTES ARE NUMBERS, SO I HOPE YA DON'T PENALIZE ME ON MY EFFORTS...NOW WOULD YA? NICE WORK...A BROOKFULL OF WORDS WITH AN OCEAN OF PASSION! AND QUITE WORTHY OF A NUMBER...WHICH WOULD BE THE # 10 CATCH UP TO YOU AGAIN....!