Fallen Poem by Yiyan Han

Fallen

Rating: 5.0


- head over heels, By Yiyan Han (c)2016-01-02, minor modification on 2020-11-23

When you're fallen
Wish your head is still up
‘n' keep cool
But you wouldn't
'cause you're crazy
head over heels

Wish one day
You wake up ‘n' ask yourself
Where I've been
What I've done
You're blindfolded
'cause you're fallen

Fallen
Sunday, December 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: blind love,crazy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Do you have experience of fallen in love, head over heels?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 19 December 2020

You have expressed that crazy fallen-head-over-heels experience extremely well, Yiyan. I cannot imagine a better way of handling it. Top marks, my friend!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2020

A lovely poem with great thoughts and wonderful message. Many of us could relate to this poem. A well conveyed and crafted write that captures the power and wonders of love. Five Stars! ! !

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