We shall sail unto grand celestial seas
floating on Cupid's beautiful breeze.
Will that make her heart fly and kiss and be pleased?
For my love unbound and knows no cease.
Under circumstances I held it in
my feelings left unheard and unseen.
Until recently fate had her slate clean;
my heart and soul so much want to win.
Lady in my dreams cruised with tides of time
leaving me chasing her with no dime,
a poor man with a heart to pour for rhyme
spending all strength I hope is no crime.
With the rays of the Sun shining brightly
I get to see this lady'f beauty.
Moon took over and shone beams very soflty
radiating her being to me.
A well expressed feeling of admiration, nice words picked, and great write.
Lucky the girl who received this poem. For the words of love it clearly shown. Man with pen, your brillance shone. Fair maiden will know, I pray that's soon. You are clever with words. I really like how you construct such beautifull piece and how you can transfer the emotions from the poem to your readers. I'll continue reading your poems. Smile.. Diane.
wow: D beautifully expressed feelings..hope she knows by now how u feel :) 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely rhythm and flow as deep as the celestial seas! Great lines of endearment!