Falling Poem by Shelby Hrvat

Falling

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Down, down, falling faster
As if I'm in a dream
My voice drowns in the darkness
For no one can hear me scream.

Falling faster toward oblivion
Surely into the pits of hell,
Never slowing, faster, faster
For a sin I shall not tell.

Still falling, warmer as I go,
Flashback to hours before,
As the knife I used to end me
Fell down and hit the floor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiffany Baldwin 16 December 2012

Very deep poem. Sometimes we need our writing to help is through our emotions. I think it is written very well

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