Far Away Poem by Ray Southworth

Far Away

Rating: 5.0


Did you hear that?
I feel it now..
The thought of hopes fading away,
Dreams and nightmares are all so real,

We need to feed them to make us feel.
I dream of a place so far away,
It’s here where I cannot stay.
I try and try and yet they die,

The thought of happiness flutters through my mind,
A person and a place somewhere in time.
One can only hope to see,
Yet unfortunately the one is not me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 14 October 2011

An amazing short write but very powerful! Thought provoking and rich in imagery with fine texture! 10+++ Keep it up! You clearly have a great poetic talent! Thanks for sharing! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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