I have written this poem in my own website in 2007
Far Away
Dearest One I tell you this
It is so far away from Home
yet so nearby my heart
I feel the rain on your head
the cooled water in your heart
I see your gentle smile
just for a while
then you turn to be sad again
will I see you smile again?
as lovely as I've ever seen?
Time has come to us
I can tell you this, it's a bliss
so far away from Home
yet nearby my heart
I know the taste of the cooled water then
especially at midnight time
to know you, to smile at me, is no crime...
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is so far away from Home but this is dearer and nearer to heart. Cool water flows to give gentle smile as stream flows in Earth. Lovely verse smiles in heart and mind. This is bliss so far from home but this bliss is again near mind and affection. This has tender touch of affection. Wonderful poem is shared here again.10
Thank you so much for your ardent response, excellent feedback and kindest comment and your lovely compliments. I am happy to read your interpretations about my poem from 2007 and republished on Poem Hunter Poem Site in 2011. GBU in Abundance, Dr. Pintu Mahakul.