Farewell Poem by Opeyemi Borisade

Farewell

Rating: 5.0


Yesterday, we found comfort in eachother's hearts
And grace in eachother's arms as though for eternity
How so soon the clouds gather at winter
As distrust plants its seeds in the womb of our minds
Now yesterday'll fade as if never it was
And today fills with dark scary clouds
The bridge between us I fold for good
And bid you farewell from this shore forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 29 September 2009

Has that lonely feeling

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Stacey Watts 20 October 2009

very sad but beautiful poem. The imagery was wonderful as the words flowed gracefully. Well done.

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Luwi Habte 13 October 2009

heart felt poem lovely piece luwi

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Omar Ibrahim 29 September 2009

wow how nice! ! ! you use the metaphor well..and i liked your expressions and how there is a bridge which diffrenciate between you and the other...good poem keep writing..

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Mubeen Sadhika 29 September 2009

Good expression. nicely penned. beautiful narration.

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Ariel Child 29 September 2009

love especially 'And bid you farewell from this shore forever. ': -)

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