Fast Exit Poem by YURI DURAAN

Fast Exit

Rating: 5.0


I’m leaving in a hurry…

the same way I came

instant attraction
quick reaction
fast seduction

rapid heartbeat
5 thousand counts
a minute

5 thousand hours of
pent-up frustration
poured out in a
moment of sensation

and a second later
my whispered
goodbye

I’m leaving in a hurry…

Don’t say anything…

You won’t even see me go

Monday, April 20, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: frustration,leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 03 May 2009

fast it comes...faster it leaves...momentary bliss...thank God! it has the courtesy at least to tell you before it leaves! 10

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Nkululeko Mdudu 30 April 2009

It would be best, if not expected for one to go the same way they came. nice read!

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Dewald Viljoen 20 April 2009

I hate those fast exits but at least they get the heartache over and done with!

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YURI DURAAN

YURI DURAAN

South Africa
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