Anyone can write about sex...
It is like writing about the rain -
only being able to aptly describe it
if you have walked naked in a flood
with the rain beating down on you...
following the sensual flow of the water
down the road... down... down
and feeling the velvet drops on your skin
when you open your mouth to take the
water in... to feel the surge of it
taste it
swallow it
wade through it with your body
your senses alerted to every change of
temperature where the imaginary stream
takes you
looking up and seeing nothing but rain
and life and love and lust -
giving over to the experience,
surrendering self and being a sacrifice to
the open heavens
almost drowning in the downpour
before finding shelter in warm,
loving arms.
Anyone can write about sex.
I can write about the rain...
I'm qualified.
no one can write about the rain like you! i've got a different opinion on the stuff now. nicely done. thanks
This Poem Is Truly Amazing. I can feel everything you describe. You took me with you through the rain! Bravo!
Good imagery here, Yuri...a sensual write on rain...love rain... love to write on rain or it rains love...I take them all...okay? Good piece 10
Beautiful poem, Yuri, as usual.I've always been fond of rain but you have given it new meaning. Thanks Richard
Sex or rain - whichever, but you'd do justice to either as this beautiful poem shows. Rgds, Ivan
wow, what a lovely poem Yuri, greratly inspired with playful yet potent. even my mother would surely enjoy it, even virgin forests would appreciate the rain; in due time. -nkuli
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Maar min mense kan so skryf oor die reën! pragtig! ;)