Life is full of mystery
of unexpected encounter
meeting faces and unforgettable places,
We just couldn't understand.

Sleepness nights of a waiting heart,
Blaming fate with a cruel end,
Love untold, desires forsaken
the heart remains the same.

Could we be honest and look at life this way:

To meet, to know, to love and then to part...
Is the sad fate of many human hearts.

Comments about Fate by VIRGINIA PECHO GELY

  • (1/7/2012 11:14:00 AM)

    Sleeples nights of a waiting heart is beautiful and sad at the same time yet paints a colourful picture. Lovely (Report) Reply

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  • Yoseph Lupu (12/27/2011 5:32:00 AM)

    I would like to convince you, to try to write more lines 'in this poem, before the last line! The poem is written wanderful! (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2011 4:49:00 PM)

    So true. Wonderful write.
    Thanks for sharing. :)
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  • Federico del Corazón (12/21/2011 12:04:00 PM)

    great poem, it reminds me of this poem from Rumi:

    My heart is so small
    it’s almost invisible.
    How can You place
    such big sorrows in it?

    “Look, ” He answered,
    “your eyes are even smaller,
    yet they behold the world.”
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2011 7:08:00 AM)

    Thanks Francois. I have still some more poems to share. I hope you'll read my second poem and please comment about it. Virginia (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2011 3:53:00 PM)

    loved this... i really did. I am forever in awe of your writing. please write more. (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2011 11:46:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comments. See you. Virginia (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/19/2011 11:31:00 AM)

    I like this poem! ! ! .fate is the sibling of human beings! ! !
    A g'd poem! ! !
    (Report) Reply

  • Abhimanyu Kumar.s (12/13/2011 4:02:00 AM)

    the lines are simple yet effective and the theme is well displayed. keep growing.10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2011 8:40:00 AM)

    I like this poem alot. It short and simple yet holds alot of meaning (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 12, 2011

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