M. Asim Nehal

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Fate And Destiny - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Fate had a fight with destiny, life and death: :

Fate said I am preordained course of anybody's life
Destiny said I am a set of predetermined events,
Life said without me you both are useless
Death said I am in love with life and I always succeed.

Topic(s) of this poem: destiny, fate, life and death, rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Fate And Destiny by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/10/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    Interesting poem, nicely written. (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/31/2015 5:41:00 AM)

    Verly, a well crafted poem with the true essence of life (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (10/29/2015 4:18:00 AM)

    A witty writing with truth and wisdom, carefully and completely comprised in just five lines. Very well done, Sir. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/28/2015 11:58:00 PM)

    A wonderful mix of the basic forces that chart human life! Who is stronger.... the question remains! Greatly enjoyed Asim! (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2015 11:48:00 PM)

    Another wise rubaiyat, God bless u Asim. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/28/2015 9:51:00 AM)

    Wow the last line about death is remarkable. Great write.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Saheb Mohapatra (10/28/2015 8:47:00 AM)

    all the four lines at the end are excellently and quite perfectly penned................yes all these thing are in perfect coordination...............very nice piece of work. thanks. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/3/2016 2:26:00 PM)

    Thanks much Saheb))))))

  • (10/28/2015 2:05:00 AM)

    so true so accurately phrased.-10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (10/28/2015 12:38:00 AM)

    A wonderful piece, Mohammed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2015

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