Fated Poem by Mohammad alKurdi
Fated
Too long it was since they first met
She looked when he gazed then the two
Eyes rested in tha same nest best.
As a lyric had found his tone
He began to play his music
She was spreading her influence.
The waited soul mate finding in
Each other; their two hearts started
To beat each to each and not sleep
To where the life could lead and beat.
Started beating fearly, meeting.
In a wink and all of a sudden
That heart's feeling coudn't be trodden
All what they had drown for the next,
Ended because they knew that their
Fate was not, not made as they aimed.
this one really does move the deepest feelings in one's heart. Thousands of words seem to be squeezed harmoniously in thse lines. way to go keep on it
F or A ll U r poems S ingle word T ells U nsatisfying, S tupid ad andshallow description of them
there is no word can describe my feeling about your poem i loved the details of the lovers and description of their fate it is amasterpiece
what a great words for a great relatonship... but unfortunatley it is end like that way..... why......why the many of relationships end badly like that but......... you are a poet and you don't get blam for that it is verey good poem for a verey good poet.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 5:23:06 AM # 1.0.0.1119
it`s an very wonderful poem great job