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Whatever It Costs

Rating: 3.6

I do not know if you do know,
If that piece of me could
Not flow,
To you to catch yours and
Might draw,
A picture of you in my law.

No body knows,
No body'll never cause
Effects on a mountain
Will never bow right then.
Standing forever his own rose
Fragile dream comes towards.

He bought to fullfill oh
Whatever it could cost, or no!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
samar Halabi 20 July 2008

strong and deeply feelings...very nice thanks

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Blue Eyes 03 July 2008

it feels like a poem of heart i do not know where to start

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 June 2008

to own a genuine love is priceless what's more do i need when i've already had you by my side...

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&&angel4ever && 19 June 2008

i think u successed to tell us what u want to say i like the love between words hold ur pen and keep working

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Sally Sh. 18 June 2008

lovely couple of verses on the first stanza...loved the end the way it connects to the title...questions within statements...i like the poem

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2010

I do not know if you do know, If that piece of me could Not flow, To you to catch yours and Might draw, A picture of you in my law…. beautiful selction of words...and lines a bit smudged in the mountain haze... nice impact cheers

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Noha El3wdy 26 May 2009

lovely, deep and mysterious

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Yasser Koor 16 January 2009

i don't know what to say something mysterious in the writing way it is full of love it is shining day it is complecated with nice ray...

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A price higherthan rubies that's what the soul costs when one is in love with life.A ten from me.

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Very well writing I like it! Hope to read more soon! Keep up the good work!

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