Father (Haiku) Poem by Cena Rose

Father (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


A faded smile lit
Callused hands
Tuck me in at night

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I only do this because its best.. Haiku is a syllabic poem with 5-7-5 syllable and is written about nature.. Senryu is the same syllable count and is written about love and the likes.. nice poem! ! !

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something i never got to experience but u described it so well

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Serenity Prayer 13 August 2008

very short but very sweet. good job.

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