Fear Lurks Poem by yabadabadoo

Fear Lurks

Rating: 5.0


When fear lurks,
The shadows come to life,
Dancing demons,
Swaying to and fro.

When fear lurks,
It slithers around unseen,
Whispering lies in my ears,
Its voice like nails on a chalkboard.

Sharp needles poke my neck,
My hair stands on end,
As if reaching for safety that is nowhere to be found,
And a thousand shocks echo through my body.

When fear lurks,
It will always find you,
You can never run from yourself,
Your own mind will hunt you for eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 18 December 2008

Fantastic description of fear. Ron

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Much truth in here.... evocative and well-penned. t x

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Nice nice nice.. I love the wording.. Dan

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Rebekah Arwood 25 November 2008

A very convincing poem and easy to relate to. I almost got shivers at the 'nails on chalk board.' Well done!

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Callie Carroll 25 November 2008

Keep on, girl. I am enjoying your poems.

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