Tiku akp


Feeble And Freak - Poem by Tiku akp

Today I am feeling lonely
Lonely like a stork in the pond
My limbs are feeling weak
Like before I am not a vagabond

I have already lost eye sight
Mind has gone weak and feeble
I have been sitting in the cot
To walk few paces I have trouble

I have lost taste of foods
Most of the time I remain hungry
Ticking of clock is irritating for me
Sound of birds makes me angry

Why I am feeling old and weak
Why I am acting like a freak
I have lost interest in this world
Wars and blood are making me sick

Sitting here in my dark room
I am waiting for the light outside
Light of lasting peace and love that
Will give me a life of honor and pride

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love, peace


Comments about Feeble And Freak by Tiku akp

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/22/2018 11:03:00 AM)

    A very hopeful poem, I know waiting time is too long but it pays, I quote: 10+++
    Sitting here in my dark room
    I am waiting for the light outside
    Light of lasting peace and love that
    Will give me a life of honor and pride
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    Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda(10/23/2018 10:26:00 AM)

    That is a very nice compliment Sir. Appreciated.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/14/2018 12:47:00 PM)

    Unless the grace of God one feels weak, feeble and trouble. If God will be with him or her there will be peace. Taking this theme you have inscribed a beautiful poem. The last stanza is much impressive. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report)Reply

    Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda(10/16/2018 10:02:00 AM)

    God has always shown the path to the weak and hungry. Thanks very much Sir.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 14, 2018



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