Feel Alive Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Feel Alive

Rating: 5.0


don't be a passing clouds
in a windy sky
let not your bewildering thoughts
be entangled
cleanse the inner you, consciously and lively
anchor your endless mind
bring the better changes generously
and feel alive...

Thursday, June 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: feel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
feel alive
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Sebastian 04 July 2016

How true! Your inner self at peace makes you alive. Wonderful write.

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To feel alive, hope we need to cleanse the inner self conscientiously, thanks for the complimentary notes and reviews, welcome poet

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 July 2016

Really very refreshing. One should work with his utmost potential to achieve his goal. Inspiring drop.

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thanks for the positive review, welcome for the rejuvenating comments dear poet

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Welcome, revamping the self us must I hope, thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Cleanse the inner you! ! And live in peace. Nice work.

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