.feeling Tired..: ( Poem by Rigzin Namgyal

.feeling Tired..: (

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feeling so tired what should I do
feeling so dull what should I do
O God! ! ! what punishment I deserved from thee
this exam is killing me
how I come out of these books..so vast as the sea
what do I do..that you have taken everything that made me glee

on the top of that it is so hot..its killing the very me
this heat stings me like the sting of a bee
I wana be me..very me
Oh God! ! ! ..don't burden me with all the trauma..you gifted me

it is the days ahead after the exams that I wan't to see
the very thought of that fills in me...a sense of me
I go joy to think where I will be

its my home...my Ladakh! ! ! ..where else would I be
its the nature's lap which seems like calling me
feeling drained in this place where I am forced to be
its Ladakh..my home where I want to be: (

Monday, October 3, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: homesickness,musing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theany Ouy 13 May 2014

Nicely put together with a lovely flow of smooth rhythm. I like your style. Lovely piece.

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Reginia Dawson 09 April 2014

Having faith is what this poem is about. Sometime you are tired but when you call on God, you gain stregnth to finish

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Patricia Grantham 11 February 2013

I never did like to take a test, it is the only way to succeed in life Appreciated

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Neela Nath Das 22 September 2012

Yes, don't get tired of study and exam. All the best.

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Jacqui Broad 29 December 2011

The writing exam blues... Just study and do your best and don't panic. Good luck with your studies...

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