beautiful girl, beautiful girl
you are so powerful
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
i should have drawn a line
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
how i bring myself out of your spell
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
now that you are so beautiful
and i am ruined
Ruined by love, we can all relate to that. Good poem. Thanks
never try for sky but remain on earth wih smell, fragrance and faith
beautiful poem, beautiful poem your poem is so powerful beautiful work, beautiful work i will give my top marks for this! keep it up Rigzin! ! !
thanx for the invite.... :) its like a Aesop fable....almost rhymed to nursery style well written tc
Simple write, though it depicts the joy of love and the heartbreak. Good write.
how i bring myself out of your spell ? ? By repeating the beautiful girl, you are emphasizing something which you understand and want to express in a dear way. thank you. very good poem. liked your simplicity in words and expressions. tony
Beauty can be deceptive...I love the construction of the poem and style of writing... But I just don't understand how and or why someone's beauty can ruin another... The ruin may not be her fault, , , ,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what do you mean actually